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    Author: EternallyMystic
    ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
    Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9/18/25
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    i can feel you everywhere i go
    my hands are reaching for you
    i can feel you on my finger tips
    my tongue is dancing behind my lips
    i can smell you as tho you were right beside me
    in my dreams you lie there
    when i wake up you are no apart of me
    and my nightmares begin
    im all alone in this world and i feel you all around me
    i try to hold on to every feeling every smell every taste
    in my heart you are mine and mine alone
    but in reality i shared you with the world
    you made me who i am today
    i cannot bear to trust i cannot bear to love another like i love you
    i feel you everywhere i go
    everywhere i feel you right there so close until my eyes open




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