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Releaseing my soul


Author: EternallyMystic
ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9 /18 /25
Words: 142
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Releaseing my soul



Take my hand and lead the way;
tell me all you want to say.
Whisper softly in my ear,
all those things I want to hear.
Kiss my lips and touch my skin;
bring out passions deep within.
Pull me close and hold me near;
take away my pain and fear.
In the darkness of the night,
be my beacon, shine your light.
In the brightness of the sun,
show me that you are the one.
Give me wings so I can fly;
for I can soar when you're nearby.
Enter my heart, break down the wall,
it's time for me to watch it fall.
I've been a prisoner, can't you see?
Break my chains and set me free.
Strip me of my armor tight;
you'll find I won't put up a fight.
Release my soul held deep within . . .




Submitted on 2007-06-30 15:54:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  thanks i like your writings to
| Posted on 2007-07-09 00:00:00 | by EternallyMystic | [ Reply to This ]
  this is a beautiful poem! well done :-)
| Posted on 2007-07-02 00:00:00 | by psalm305 | [ Reply to This ]


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