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Author: EternallyMystic
ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9 /18 /25
Words: 98
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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numb



When did I go away again?
stop being me, go numb?
Has anyone in my life noticed
I'm not the same person anymore?

The sound of a childs laughter
is the sweetest sound I've ever heard,
and yet, I seek solace even from that.

I need to feel the quiet.
I need the solace of hearing nothing
but my own thoughts.
I need to listen quietly enough
so that someday, maybe someday........
I'll find myself again.




Submitted on 2007-06-30 16:06:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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