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    dots Submission Name: numbdots
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    Author: EternallyMystic
    ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
    Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9/18/25
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    When did I go away again?
    stop being me, go numb?
    Has anyone in my life noticed
    I'm not the same person anymore?

    The sound of a childs laughter
    is the sweetest sound I've ever heard,
    and yet, I seek solace even from that.

    I need to feel the quiet.
    I need the solace of hearing nothing
    but my own thoughts.
    I need to listen quietly enough
    so that someday, maybe someday........
    I'll find myself again.




    Submitted on 2007-06-30 16:06:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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