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    dots Submission Name: Falldots

    Author: EternallyMystic
    ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
    Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9/18/25
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Don't let me fall
    into a hole
    of missing regret
    and knowing betrayal

    Don't let me fall
    beneath the lights
    that shadow hope
    and grip fate

    Don't let me fall
    behind your back
    where i can't see
    or can't keep up

    Don't let me fall
    into your eyes
    to lay myself down
    in their fathomless green

    Don't let me fall
    into your arms
    where i can lose
    all i have won

    Don't let me fall
    below the surface
    of my reality
    and your lies

    And don't let me fall

    In love with you again.

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