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Fall


Author: EternallyMystic
ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9 /18 /25
Words: 103
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Fall





Don't let me fall
into a hole
of missing regret
and knowing betrayal

Don't let me fall
beneath the lights
that shadow hope
and grip fate

Don't let me fall
behind your back
where i can't see
or can't keep up

Don't let me fall
into your eyes
to lay myself down
in their fathomless green

Don't let me fall
into your arms
where i can lose
all i have won

Don't let me fall
below the surface
of my reality
and your lies

And don't let me fall

In love with you again.




Submitted on 2007-06-30 16:40:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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