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Author: EternallyMystic
ASL Info:    18-F-Mich
Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 9 /18 /25
Words: 360
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Can I find it in my heart to forgive
Each day fighting with breaking down
I try so hard to forget your ways
They haunt me when I sleep
I do not want to be afraid
But inside Im dying from what you did
You took a piece from me my love
and I don't see you returning it anytime

They say revenge is not for us to decide
But if you died tonight I would not shed a tear
Anguised by the misery you caused
I toss and turn in my bed
Ready to explode , but I remain calm
Please I rather love you then hate you
But I cannot control my fury you caused
And knowing my situation is unfixable
You have left me so helpless

I lay here cut by your sword
Crippled with anger , I wish you could see
me while I lay on my death bed
But you ran away to afraid to look back
Knowing you would crumble from your mistake
You bury your pain by destroying another
so you leave me breathless and run away
Im tired and my time is short

I only look to the sky in hopes
that one day , one day soon you will see
what you did to me was not forgotten
And that someone above was looking down
Your time will come but I won't be around
For its time I move on
And thanks to you I shed my last tear
Because never again will I feel this pain
Of a twisting sword in my heart

"Beautiful , Beautiful stars above
Do not forget me, do not let me go forgotten
And at night when he sleeps
Let the pain he brought me drench him in sweat
if happiness never finds him again
that is sweeter then any womb he ever gave
That truly is greater then any pain I give"

Relief at last I breathe my last breath
Im cut, but cut by the grace of revenge
and no sooner have I drifted away
will I look over to see him laying by my side

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