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    dots Submission Name: leave me alonedots
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    Author: justdontknow
    ASL Info:    18/f/melb
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 9/18/25
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Angry
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    dotsleave me alonedots
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    dont talk to me
    i dont want to talk to u
    ur pissing me off
    i dont like u cant u see it
    i try ignore u
    u keep coming back
    stay away from me
    im sick of ur crap
    why try make me jealous
    it aint gunna work
    ive got what i want
    man ur such a jerk
    i did love u once
    but u fucked up too many times
    wat did u expect from me
    did u think i would keep coming back
    well not this time asshole
    im out im gone forever
    now fuck off
    piss off
    go away
    whatever
    just leave me alone
    mother fucker.




    Submitted on 2007-07-01 05:36:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Dont We All Feel Like This At One Point Or Another
    | Posted on 2007-07-05 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]


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