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    dots Submission Name: Cold As The Blade dots
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    Author: DBE
    ASL Info:    16 - Male - UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 30/31/24
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 820
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 823



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       WARNING: May Trigger Self Harmers!!


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    dotsCold As The Blade dots
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    As cold as the blade
    That slices through my skin
    Is only my heart
    That bleeds from within

    As that blood
    Spills all around
    I smile with content
    And laugh with no sound

    But itís only my thigh
    Where I made the slit
    Next is my wrist
    Where the blade will hit

    And then I would die
    And hurt no more
    But you will not cry
    I know that for sure

    I have caused
    You so much pain
    And Iím so sorry
    For going insane

    I used to blame her
    But now I see
    Thereís only one person to blame
    And that person is me

    So I might as well
    Finish with this rhyme
    To fall out of life
    And fall out of time




    Submitted on 2007-07-01 11:44:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, incredible. i think that this poem has the exact feelings of when i cut. its going in my faves
    | Posted on 2007-07-06 00:00:00 | by Nessyjane | [ Reply to This ]


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