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    dots Submission Name: Thank God for Fallen Angelsdots
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    Author: eagle wing
    ASL Info:    15/m/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 29/34/24
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThank God for Fallen Angelsdots
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    there are those
    these fallen angels
    their there for you
    when you least expect them
    they never show off
    their always descrete
    in how they work
    its the way they speak
    the way they act
    that help you find
    that their more then
    normal humans
    for most mankind
    are drawn to greed and pain
    but these few
    are drawn to joy and happiness
    for they can see
    that if they help those in need
    they will find
    a greater peace of mind




    Submitted on 2007-07-01 18:08:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      much truth in these few words me thinks

    nicely done from the heart

    Kate
    xx
    | Posted on 2007-08-28 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]


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