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Pointless Existence


Author: bloodydreamer27
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Pointless Existence



You're like a plague that just wont go away,
Like a poison just waiting to be drunk.
You're like a razor wanting to be drug against my skin,
Like a pill hoping to be taken for an overdose.
You're everything that's wrong in this world,
The rapes, the murders, the beaten children.
You're something everyone is afraid of,
Because they know that you have the power to kill them.
You're everything except for what I needed,
Someone to love me and take good care of me.
You used to do that but not anymore,
All you do now is make everyone suffer.
There is no reason for your existence.




Submitted on 2007-07-02 09:58:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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