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    dots Submission Name: Regretdots
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    Author: bloodydreamer27
    Elite Ratio:    2.19 - 54/130/78
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Misc/I hate you
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    Description:
       Goes through the past, present, and future.
    'Cause he kicked me out this morning.


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    dotsRegretdots
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    When I was little you always teased me and gave me low self-esteem.
    And as I got older you continued to do so.
    But after a while you realized that it didn't work anymore,
    So you started yelling and blaming everything on me.
    You knew that it hurt me and made me cry so you started doing it even more,
    Then things got worse.
    You threatened to hit me and almost did a couple of times,
    You told me to get the fuck out of your house 'cause you thought I was lying to you.
    And you know what?
    I've dealt with this for way too long.
    So now I'm going to get as far away from you as I can,
    And if you find me and try to make me come home,
    I'll tell the police that you've been driving without a license for a very long time,
    And that you've threatened tp hit me and almost have several times.
    I bet you'll regret what you did then.




    Submitted on 2007-07-02 10:02:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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