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    dots Submission Name: Ragdolldots
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    Author: sugar_sweet
    ASL Info:    20/ Female/ Canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 11/8/15
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 928
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       this is how I feel today...


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    dotsRagdolldots
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    pull me
    tear me
    any way you want
    I am just a rag doll to you
    the toy of two peoples affections
    caught between your bullshit
    your immaturity
    and your fighting
    You tug me this way
    he tugs me that way
    I remain in the middle
    tearing appart
    from the inside out
    praying that this stops
    before you both lose me for good




    Submitted on 2007-07-02 10:10:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ah, a lover's lament as old as time itself!! Very nicely presented...the odious love triangle, invariably doomed to disaster... most well and ably presented here in this fine poem... bravo... bravo ... bravo ... michael
    | Posted on 2007-07-03 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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