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    dots Submission Name: Someone Specialdots

    Author: xSaraHx
    ASL Info:    17/Female/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 107/75/47
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 608
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       I wrote this for a 6 weeks project at the end of my Freshman year. We studied some famous poetry and then had to write some of our own. The topics of choice were a special person or place. Yeah how juvenile.
    I hated my teacher. She thought she was still teaching 6th graders. She was super bitchy.
    But hey I got a 37 out of 40 so whatever.

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    dotsSomeone Specialdots

    So I met a boy
    He is about this high
    His eyes are blue and gold
    I swear this is no lie
    And when he holds my hand
    There is this feeling I don't understand
    But all I know is he's amazing

    The color wheat is his hair
    His voice makes a sound
    With which nothing can compare
    I would follow this boy wherever he went
    Because time with him is very much well spent
    I wish we had more time together

    Sadly I moved and he stayed back home
    Sometimes I still miss him when I'm all alone
    I've cried all my tears
    He's confided my fears
    But things are ok now
    We're still together
    Now and Forever

    Submitted on 2007-07-02 12:21:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ha. the guy under me flattered himself too much.

    you can tell it was written for school.
    | Posted on 2007-07-20 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]
      i have 'wheat' hair! oh well, thanx for writing about me. hehe, i feel loved!
    | Posted on 2007-07-02 00:00:00 | by freddybuzzkill | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so sweet:) nice write!
    | Posted on 2007-07-02 00:00:00 | by EL | [ Reply to This ]

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