I wouldn't mind dying
If it meant that you would to
I wouldn't mind the pain
If I thought it affected you
I could bear the scars with dignity
If they marred your perfect face
Wouldn't mind the bitter
If i thought you shared the taste
I would die to cause you pain
And love to cause your death
Darken the light within your eyes
Breath your dying breath
okay, it scared me a bit. don't think i'm a serious pu**y, but you seriously hate someone don't you? well, whatever...other than that, it was brilliantly written and a disturbing, though thoughtful piece of art, good work!
Wow
I really love this!
I can very much relate to this.Becasue wouldent we all go threw so many things if we new it would also affect that one person?
I no I would
I love the rhyeimg once again lol
It has good flow as well
good job
Submission Name: Breath
