"My choice to love". by Magger32

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Author:	Magger32
ASL Info:	18-female-PA.
Elite Ratio:	2.45 - 53/131/124
Words:	117

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	738
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this is about how much i KNOW i love this guy, but i don't know if i believe in love. Do i even know the meaning?

"My choice to love". dots

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I miss you but you don't seem to care,
I need you but i know you can't always be there,
I have to grow up to live on my own,
I need to learn how to grow,
How to change,
But most importantly how to forget your name,
I need silence in the night,
I need to sleep to wake up right,
I feel your sorrow, but i also have to deal with mine,
I need you out of my life for good this time,
As much as i'll miss your smile,
Feeling your love through your voice,
I know leaving you is my choice,
Like it was my choice to love.

~MaGgIe

Submitted on 2007-07-02 18:11:39 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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BEAUTIFUL!!!

I don't know why this doesn't have any comments...

I can understand so well what you mean, and what you're going through in this...

If I had to pick a favorite line, it would be almost impossible...

But I really appreciate this one:

I miss you but you don't seem to care

Amazing write...definitely a new fave!!!
| Posted on 2007-09-06 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]

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