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    dots Submission Name: "My choice to love".dots
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    Author: Magger32
    ASL Info:    18-female-PA.
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 53/131/124
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 698
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 652



    Description:
       this is about how much i KNOW i love this guy, but i don't know if i believe in love. Do i even know the meaning?


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    dots"My choice to love".dots
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    I miss you but you don't seem to care,
    I need you but i know you can't always be there,
    I have to grow up to live on my own,
    I need to learn how to grow,
    How to change,
    But most importantly how to forget your name,
    I need silence in the night,
    I need to sleep to wake up right,
    I feel your sorrow, but i also have to deal with mine,
    I need you out of my life for good this time,
    As much as i'll miss your smile,
    Feeling your love through your voice,
    I know leaving you is my choice,
    Like it was my choice to love.

    ~MaGgIe




    Submitted on 2007-07-02 18:11:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      BEAUTIFUL!!!

    I don't know why this doesn't have any comments...

    I can understand so well what you mean, and what you're going through in this...

    If I had to pick a favorite line, it would be almost impossible...

    But I really appreciate this one:

    I miss you but you don't seem to care

    Amazing write...definitely a new fave!!!
    | Posted on 2007-09-06 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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