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    dots Submission Name: Notes to Real Peopledots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 647/1206/773
    Words: 583
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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       this is funny because its totally honest. not that im not usualy at least mostly honest when i write but noone ever knows who im talking about so its ok. but this time its obvious and that makes it more real to me somehow. this isnt a poem, nor do i expect the usual "OH MY GOSH I REALLY LIKE THIS"... because maybe people wont. but


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    dotsNotes to Real Peopledots
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    Dear Caleb- You got within an inch of ruining Pink Floyd for me forever. I dont appreciate crying during "Wish You Were Here" because I happen to love that song and the tears make it highly unpleasant. Im willing to be your friend. Dont mess this up again. And I promise not to tell you that I love you still to the point of desperation and that I miss you.. especially at night.

    Dear Jonathan- I miss you even though youre very very close by. Ive thought many many times about kissing you again but Id rather immerse myself in ice water than risk hurting you again. So I will never ever give you a reason to think I want you just in case. Im sorry I couldnt make you happy. But I guess that apology applies to just about everyone.

    Dear Dylan- You are freaking cute as hell and I will never love you. Which makes me like you a lot. You are nothing to worry about because you are either in or out and one way or the other I dont end up with any less pieces of my heart. That is more comforting than you could ever know. Thanks for taking up so much of my time that otherwise would have been employed by being emo and writing broken heart songs.

    Dear Mom- Thanks for being cool most of the time. Thanks for teaching me the names of songs and for taking me to concerts and for wanting me to be smart and for loving me even when I prove once again that Im an immature little freakshow. Im sorry that I cause so many problems by wanting to do my own thing but thanks for being there anyway.. Especially for helping me dye my hair.

    Dear Dad- Thank you very much for making it so easy to leave.

    Dear Ollie- I owe you honesty more than I owe anyone anything. So let me say for one that I miss you every day and will always love you. And let me say for two that every now and then I get paranoid that if you dated any guy that I know, he would love you more than me. No matter what guy, no matter how much he liked or didnt like me. I cant explain this fear. But I think its a valid one. But I dont blame you at all. Id love you more too.

    Dear Friends- If I havent mentioned you specifically its either because I have no guilt attached to you or because I absolutely cant even think of words to say to you to make anything different. Some of you (R, B, J, T, etc. ) I have so much to say to but it'll never ever change anything so I wont.

    Dear Self- You will be fine. You are stronger than most people give you credit for, smart just like people say you are, nice even though it doesnt always show, caring although you show it in strange ways, capable even if you get lost and cant figure shit out, and loveable even if youll never believe it. I wont tell you that youre beautiful because I cant say for sure and it wont make a different anyway. But you are good enough to be someones number one. But you dont have to be to live life. Remember that always.






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      .....youv'e stayed my #1
    | Posted on 2007-07-10 00:00:00 | by debbieXY | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this is a perfect thing to read/write when you're angry, it would show you the good things about each and every person you know... it's very deep and everyone should write one. I can really relate to all of this. I find me replacing all the names in my head to all of MY different friends! Keep up the good work and maybe comment on my new work? Sylva's Song - Example. If you like horror/werewolves/vampires, you'll love it!

    --- Kodane Z. N. C.
    | Posted on 2007-07-07 00:00:00 | by Kodane | [ Reply to This ]
      i think everyone needs to sit down and write 'notes to real people' even if those people don't get to read them until it's safe. i know that i've found myself writing them to people who have impacted my life. especially those who don't realize it. some times i send them but they usually don't understand. and i want to thank you for publishing this piece. because not only has it touched me and inspired me to express some honesty to a few people who truly deserve it and to a few who don't. i think that this is your most powerful piece. it's deeply personal to you and yet completely relate able to the rest of us. who can now lean on your courage and do what is right. to write what is needed.

    thank you

    in shadow
    | Posted on 2007-07-05 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't really know what to say, but I want to comment. It's so honest...and...I can't even place it with words. I really liked the one to yourself. I think you should read it more then anything. It's very true...for just about anyone. You shouldn't care about what other people are going to think, because The people who only care about what you look like on the outside...don't matter and the ones who care about the inside DO matter. So you keep them close, and the others far. You've probably seen that quote somewhere before, and it's true.
    | Posted on 2007-07-04 00:00:00 | by EbonyBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      I wish that you listened to this "self" more than you listened to the mean girl in you who says you aren't good enough. Because honestly, honey, you're too good for a lot of the people that we meet. You're too good for me, but something in you says that you aren't and i wish it would die. I love every part of you except the part that says you're less than the awesome person you are. I don't care who "loves" who, in the end i'll love you no more than any boy could. And i suppose that's my honesty to you: It doesn't matter who you date, in the end i'll never like them. And it won't be their fault. I do love you, perhaps not like you want/used to want me to, but i do. And if i could have just two people love me, it would be you and 'Remy. Cause honestly, that's all i need. I love sarah and jeffy with all my heart, but i don't need them. I Need you. And no matter what the mean part in you says, you're needed, wanted, loved, and thought of.
    | Posted on 2007-07-04 00:00:00 | by ollie_wicked | [ Reply to This ]
      You know, even if you didn't expect to hear this, I DID like this. It is honest and it's coming from you so that makes even better. There's like a lot going on in all the paragraphs. It's almost like telling a story but in a poetic way, if you see what I mean. The last paragraph was what I liked the most because it was reassuring and real. I would say a lot of people, I include myself, would really relate. In my opinion, that's a key thing to have when you're writing. Anyway, I really did like it. Keep writing.

    *Foreseer*
    | Posted on 2007-07-03 00:00:00 | by Foreseer | [ Reply to This ]


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