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    Author: sugar_sweet
    ASL Info:    20/ Female/ Canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 11/8/15
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    worthless and alone
    dying just to feel alive
    this is the very essence of who I am
    my mind knows no happy thought
    my eyes know only tears
    I have nothing but loneliness and self hatred
    you dont know me
    you can't save me from my prison
    if you could would you take the time?
    in my hour of need
    to save me from myself?




    Submitted on 2007-07-03 23:02:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you have put how i feel into words
    its great i love it
    | Posted on 2007-07-09 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]


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