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Breaking Down


Author: ViCiOuSWrItEr
ASL Info:    18/Female/Desolate
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Words: 150
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Breaking Down



Dying , dying

You do this to my every time

Lying, lying

I can't take this anymore

Crying, crying

Don't want to feel this now

Trying, trying

To forget about all this some how



Why do you always get in my way

I am ready to die today

When will this come to an end

I wont continue to pretend



Sighing, sighing

After every word you said

I've got the barrel to my spinning head

Ready to bleed

I'm hanging on by just a thread.



Why do you always get in my way

I am ready to die today

When will this come to an end

I wont continue to pretend

You gotta go

You gotta go away today…..




Submitted on 2007-07-04 12:09:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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