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    dots Submission Name: Love for My teachers of life...dots
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    Author: EbonyBlood
    ASL Info:    14/F/Can.
    Elite Ratio:    3.7 - 79/79/73
    Words: 1289
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 845
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       EEKS wrote one of these and I really liked the idea. It was honest and something I've always wanted to say to my friends and family.


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    dotsLove for My teachers of life...dots
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    Heather - I know your gone, and we were good friends through Elementary school. I missed you in Junior high..and I still miss you. Though we all change and sometimes leaving people is a way of change. Though, I still miss you and hope your life is going well.

    Jillian - You're gone as well. I remember every good time Heather, You and I shared through are Trio of sleepovers. I miss you and will always love you in a friend way. I will probably always just watch you from the sidelines...wishing we were still friends. Along with Heather.

    Neisha - There is no one I miss more then you! When you decided drugs were worth more then friends, I couldn't have cried more. My heart completely shattered. I loved you even when we fought. Fighting is sometimes a way of showing how we loved each other. I'll always miss the old you, and though I still sometimes talk with you. I'll never truly feel the same with you.

    Anjelica - I completely miss you as well. When Neisha, you and I again had our own Trio. I loved having you around to share our secrets and our love for Anime. Though you changed, and I watched it happen..knowing I couldn't stop it. I hated myself for letting you go like I did. Making you think I hated you...when I truly just wished for us to be friends again. I'm glad we sorted it out completely...before you decided to never talk to me again.

    Aly - I love you so much! We've been friends since grade two! And I still love you as much as I did then! When you meowed for no reason and had your random words. <33 You are fun to have a parties and though people find you annoying because you lecture them. I know it's out of love, and I love you for it! You are always there for me, even when I shared with you I was a lesbian. Thank you.

    Patrick - We were good friends and I wish it could have stayed that way. I stupidly said I loved you, and I did. I was so sad it completely ruined our friendship and I've taught myself that maybe a friendship is all it should ever be.

    Armando - I love you man. Though we went out...you still were friends with me. I was happy we could put that behind us. And that we are just fine as friends. I'm so sorry that your mom had to leave this world..though she isn't your birth mother. She was there for you when your birth mother wasn't. I want you to be happy about that and try not to completely forget that. I'm sad that you've moved to drugs a bit and I'm trying to keep you away...your so much more fun without them! I'll miss you when your in The States for that whole year. I won't even be there when you leave! </3

    Krystal - You were there in Grade eight when you noticed that Neisha and Anjelica had decided to leave me. I love you so much for that! And though you can be annoying..who isn't? And I love you for that. Thanks for being there! I hope we can be friends for a long time.

    Mom - Though I shout and say I hate you, I don't! And I never will. I'm always grateful that you stayed with me during my hard years in school. I will always love the quote you gave to me.."The problem with normal is it always gets worse." I love it, and will always stick by it!

    Callen - You are the oldest sibling in the family. I love you very much, you are protective and it can be annoying but I know you're only trying to keep your younger siblings safe. I will miss you when you go away for 9 months. I'm so happy you were accepted. I hate when you do your little spit thing, but it's you and I love you just the way you are. (P.S. I don't think your fat, and NEVER listen to anyone who thinks you are!)

    Anna - I love you very much, though we fight constantly because we share a room. We have our differences, but who is exactly the same? I'm happy you are my sister. You stick up for what you believe is right..and I wish I could do the same. You are tall and loud and will always be heard. Don;t forget it...You will be a perfect teacher!

    Iain - Mmm. I love you! You may be annoying and younger, but you're so much fun to be with! Your funny and joke around a lot. And it seems You and I get in trouble a lot together. Haha. We've always had fun times. If you have kids...I can't wait to meet them. ;D

    Dad - You understand how I feel in school, which I love. I'm totally sad about what you are going through. How Your mom is not doing well, and we all know it and we are going to miss her. </3 I'm sad that because you have Diabetes you may go before I want you to. I fear for that day and hope it's far off! I love you and always will!!

    Sam - You are my best friend! Though I only met you this year, we agree on so many things and laugh together so much, we never fight and get along well. We get in trouble together but, that will never make me hate you! Hahahaha, I love being with you and you are so much fun!
    I'm sad when you are sad, and happy when you are happy. I'm glad we can be each other when we are together and don't have to fear judgment from each other. I know sometimes you feel depressed, and wish you could just die. But, I want you to know...I would cry if you left. And most likely...follow you in your steps to death. Though that makes me seem like a follower, I don't know how I could survive without you. I love you so much! (In a non-sexual way. Now anyway. Lmao!)

    Finally..My pets I've had. It may seem weird I say something about them but, I truly love them and cry and fear of them getting harmed. Though some of you have left this world. Heaven wouldn't be the same without you there to greet me when I get there. I love you and Always will. Stary and Snowie, You two will always mean the world to me and I'm so very sorry I couldn't help you! I will always remember you, and Snowie...I completed our promise. I completed it! I'm sorry I didn't get to share Christmas one last time and give you turkey like I promised. But, I will always visit your grave at Christmas with a small present. Sometimes, this is the way life moves on. I knew that once you had gone...if I could live with that...I could live with kids making fun of me. Thank you very much for everything.



    I love everyone who's ever crossed my path and left a mark. Some friends I may have forgot but, I love you just as equal. Or I am not a big fan of you. I am happy to have finally got this out! Thank you for your support, love and friendship. It taught me to live the way I am, and I love myself now. And I will always remember each and every one of you!!




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    ||| Comments |||
      I'm going to guess that the reason no one's commented on this is that it's so personal. Let me say, though, that you're lucky in finding so many people willing to accept you for who you are, regardless of faults. True friends like that are hard to come by. Just don't let them fall away--if anything, that is the greatest challenge.

    --crimson
    | Posted on 2007-07-07 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]


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