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    dots Submission Name: i give updots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 501
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 944



    Description:
       just me taking my anger out
    its not really a poem but more telling the truth


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    nothing i do will change your mind
    nothing i say will make you love me
    everything i did was never enough
    everything i said made you hate me more
    in the end you couldnt stand to be with me
    you went to work just to be away from me
    you told people you didnt love me but yet you returned to me everynight
    2 MONTH HOW COULD YOU LIE
    for two fucking months you didnt love me
    but you lived in my house
    slept in my bed
    held me close kissed my forhead
    told me you loved me told me you cared
    please excuse me i think im going to be sick
    how could anyone treat someone like this
    now were apart it didnt take long for you to move on
    to find another chick to plan mind games on
    but what is really disturbing is i know you did all this to me
    but i dont care
    and the end of the day
    i still want you here
    i give up




    Submitted on 2007-07-05 06:05:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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