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    dots Submission Name: What To Believedots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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       after the way my last relationship ended it left me wondering what to believe


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    dotsWhat To Believedots
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    you told me i was beautiful
    gorgeous and stunning

    you told me you could never live without me
    and even wrote poems saying there was no one but me

    you told me i was your everything half your heart and soul

    you told me i could achieve anything if i set my mind to it

    you told me any guy would be lucky to stand a chance with me

    BUT you also told me you loved me
    and that was a lie

    so what do i believe?




    Submitted on 2007-07-05 06:15:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Believe what you think is right, because no matter what anyone else says, you can only believe what you, yourself set to believe.

    Something you just gotta learn the hard way.

    Wishing for more
    ~Brian
    | Posted on 2007-07-05 00:00:00 | by Imadjinn | [ Reply to This ]


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