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    dots Submission Name: "Memento"dots
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    Author: Martin S. Allen
    ASL Info:    33 male
    Elite Ratio:    3.98 - 671/237/43
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    Description:
       I found this poem while I was going through some old documents, and thought I'd post it. It was written several years ago.


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    dots"Memento"dots
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    Swept away but my spirit remains
    Buried at sea in peace I have lain
    To sleep in the shadow of billowing waves
    At one with the ocean as one of the brave
    In storms and in silence
    My name is engraved
    One never forgotten in love or in pain
    A loss of a life but never in vain
    I flow with the wind make love in the sheets
    Of oceans and skies forever we meet
    Iím always nearby in tears that you weep
    My spirit is free from graves of the deep
    Iíve left you a sign, above a keepsake
    The moon in the night the sun when you wake
    Remember my name and never forget
    In love and in peace Iím ever content
    Above mountains peak an onward ascent
    Behind are the shadows and time must relent




    Submitted on 2007-07-05 16:19:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      An artist of poetry at your best. Lots of feelings are put in this poem. great piece.
    | Posted on 2008-07-19 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
      Sorry, I have no criticism. This poem was excellent in every way. And very beautiful... a classic. Thank you for sharing it. Emotions are forever.
    | Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by emoxday | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem is very classy and elegant. Form and structure is perfect and fits with your words superbly well.

    Excellent.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2007-09-17 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      oh well that was pretty cool for a old 'poem'

    just cant find any thing much to say.. it does creates wonder, enigmatic appeal around it.

    its like watching some unrated movie with some unknown actors only to realize that the movie is real good entertainment... groovy..
    | Posted on 2007-07-16 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow
    I'm back again to read your wonderful work of art and I see again that you've posted something so beautiful I'm going to add it to my favorites..I'm glad that you haven't stopped writing because you are so good at it..Somebody I can be influenced by..I'm enjoying your style..

    Excellent!
    | Posted on 2007-07-06 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]


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