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Author: Martin S. Allen
ASL Info:    33 male
Elite Ratio:    3.98 - 671 /237 /43
Words: 139
Class/Type: Poetry /Nostalgia
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I found this poem while I was going through some old documents, and thought I'd post it. It was written several years ago.


Swept away but my spirit remains
Buried at sea in peace I have lain
To sleep in the shadow of billowing waves
At one with the ocean as one of the brave
In storms and in silence
My name is engraved
One never forgotten in love or in pain
A loss of a life but never in vain
I flow with the wind make love in the sheets
Of oceans and skies forever we meet
I’m always nearby in tears that you weep
My spirit is free from graves of the deep
I’ve left you a sign, above a keepsake
The moon in the night the sun when you wake
Remember my name and never forget
In love and in peace I’m ever content
Above mountains peak an onward ascent
Behind are the shadows and time must relent

Submitted on 2007-07-05 16:19:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  An artist of poetry at your best. Lots of feelings are put in this poem. great piece.
| Posted on 2008-07-19 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
  Sorry, I have no criticism. This poem was excellent in every way. And very beautiful... a classic. Thank you for sharing it. Emotions are forever.
| Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by emoxday | [ Reply to This ]
  This poem is very classy and elegant. Form and structure is perfect and fits with your words superbly well.


| Posted on 2007-09-17 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  oh well that was pretty cool for a old 'poem'

just cant find any thing much to say.. it does creates wonder, enigmatic appeal around it.

its like watching some unrated movie with some unknown actors only to realize that the movie is real good entertainment... groovy..
| Posted on 2007-07-16 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]
I'm back again to read your wonderful work of art and I see again that you've posted something so beautiful I'm going to add it to my favorites..I'm glad that you haven't stopped writing because you are so good at it..Somebody I can be influenced by..I'm enjoying your style..

| Posted on 2007-07-06 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]

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