I can't sleep at night
Always kept awake with thoughts of you running through my head
What would have happened if I had done something different?
Was it something I did?
Was it something I said?
One year of this sleepless abyss
I crave sleep
I long for it
Yet it does not come
Just to get your face out of my head
For your laugh that's still ringing in my ears to disappear
Counting to a hundred more than twice
Singing myself to sleep
None of it works
Still no sleep
I feel lost
And confused inside
Like there is something missing
Something I can't get back
Something I will never get back
Is this feeling the feeling of true love?
Love so strong it keeps me awake for countless hours at night?
Sleep won't come
All because of you
My loyalty must be greater than I thought
Because I am still hung up on you
Even after a year has passed
this one is even better. wow! and the spelling worked!!! lol. n e ways good work. and when you can't sleep try doing what i do. slam your head off of the wall and knock urself out!!! jk. i just put on some muzik that puts me to sleep... it always worked for me.
Very deep and it bitters my anger after 27 views not one person could leave a simple comment...This site says so much of its struggle on the commenting issue, and you have so many of the people that agree to it, but where of it is it happening to the ones that need it the most. Maybe this poem isn't understanding? Or perhapes outstanding to their perspective? It doesn't matter...They'll probably just leave you a constructive note that you don't really want to here, after all your request is thoughts...And here are my thoughts...I see myself in it alot...Depression can makes very sleepless, and you know as well as I, nights can be very very long, longer than days, and the tragedy about being hopeless and sleepless is that your all alone throughout the nights with the most hurtfull thing...Yourself...Your mind can hurt you, it can grasp you, it can take you, and conform you to believe that you are this curse and every other horrible thing you may call upon yourself...You begin to go insane and such things as drug abuse, cutting, even attempts come to play...This poem touched me as well as it broke my heart...But I want you to remember...There is something that you will probably not agree on me with...We are all beautiful...Every person inside of this world does not have a lack of beauty, that hides within side of them...This poem almost made me cry...