Description: someone said it souded like a free style rap song haha and they thought it was funny too what do you think??
you say -------------------------------------------
you say you love me......not!
you say you care......not!
you we'll be together
then quit screwin with other girls!
get a grip and spare me
leave me with my dignity
you made my life bad already by lying to me
which was wrong of you to do
and i'm telling you we're through
so quit wasting my time
i'll put you back in line
i don't need this right now
and niether do you
you'll have nothing left
when i'm through with you
i'll chew you out
and kick your m-effin "a"
but i got to be honest
i don't rock that way
im sorry u put this on yourself you see
this is what happens when you mess with me
i ain't trying to be rude
but c'mon dude
you deserve what you got
huh hot shot!!
too many times i cried over you
everytime you met someone new
whatever i'm done, i'm over it, finito!
and all i gotta say is you gotta go!!
your writing reminds me of someone else... look her up, her 'alias' is xSaraHx, but she's all over my page. she'll tell you why. anyway, this wasn't my favorite, but still not bad. i don't like the way you used slangy words like 'dude'. also, it gets on my nerves when people say 'effin'. alot. you seemed to have sacrificed some thoughtful lyrics for a rhyme. it's like trading love for sex, you try to keep both, but the love's more important.
Hahaha!! I love it!! I wrote something and said something along these lines to my bf of 2 yrs!! This was fantastic the emotions of anger was very strong! I love it!!
Now i hAVE TO SAY YOU ARE STILL VERY YOUNG AND YOU will find someone better someone who will treat you right and make you smile and laugh endlessly. when you do dont let him get away! trust me you will regret it later. Anyways just have fun for now while you are young! Anyways great write!