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    Author: truthbetold
    ASL Info:    20-f
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 38/45/33
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    "It's not that i don't care anymore,
    it's just that i moved on.
    It was just too heard, i couldn't hold on,
    the pain was killing me.

    I didn't mean for it to come to this,
    i didn't mean to make you cry,
    but the emotions that i've been feeling
    kept destroying my insides.

    Please forgive me
    for what i done,
    i still love you a lot."

    ..it was all a lie right from the start
    when we first met. eye to eye




    Submitted on 2007-07-06 10:19:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh wow.
    i could feel the emotions coming out of this.

    bravo bravo.
    | Posted on 2007-08-10 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]


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