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    Author: truthbetold
    ASL Info:    20-f
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 38/45/33
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 587
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 498



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       to julia my friend from the start and till the finish

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    can you give me a chance
    to tell you i care
    about everything you do
    and the stuff you go through

    can you give me a chance
    only to show you
    that i understand
    and you can take my hand

    can you give me a chance
    to let you know
    that my love is for real
    and the emotions i feel

    will you give me the chance
    to stand beside you
    i am your friend
    till the world ends




    Submitted on 2007-07-06 10:23:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What a lovely tribute to a dear friend! You have a developing talent that is delightful to read!
    | Posted on 2007-08-25 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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