This piece is very simple, but it gets to the point in a positive way. You describe everything well with few words, and I think that is great, but as with all of us from the novices, to the experts and everyone in between we can always improve upon an idea. You don't have to necessarily change anything about this if you feel that you've poured your heart out. Decide for yourself whether this is you at your best or not.
Submission Name: My love for you
