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    dots Submission Name: They Call This Irelanddots

    Author: Persephone
    ASL Info:    19/f/ US
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 328/352/136
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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       This is more of a random thought than poem. And really, this is for a dear friend from Ireland who said she missed her homeland. This is kinda my impression of that feeling.

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    dotsThey Call This Irelanddots

    So deep a blue,
    a reminder of a moore,
    she'll never see again.

    A taste of a salt,
    from shaker on the table,
    not on the rocks.

    Flaming red so bright,
    a memoir to a sunset
    too far away.

    And a patch of green
    speckled with brown,
    for a land in the distance,
    but not in the clouds.

    Submitted on 2007-07-06 20:50:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The title caught my eye as I've been longing (dreaming every night for over a decade now) to go back there and stay. I regret ever leaving. The place I live now is overwhelmingly grey with concrete and pollution.

    If you ever go there the one thing you notice, more than anything, is the many beautiful shades of green everywhere. Green dominates the landscape. The air is fresh and clean ... I feel homesick.
    | Posted on 2007-07-16 00:00:00 | by ssssss | [ Reply to This ]
      Quite the imaginative random thoughts piece on Ireland. I've never been there myself, but only heard about the castles.
    I must say that when it comes to nature type writes simple and short is the way to go. Hence we have haikus :) I like the allusion to them.
    Ack, I've run of out feedback.
    | Posted on 2007-07-06 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]

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