Summer Lovin
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I wrote this in a spurr of the moment type thing! Hope you like it!
Summer Lovin
Living a lie or Awake in a dream Don't know how to stand Inbetween whats real an make believe Good Time memories consiming me But I know he's to good for me I see it everytime he looks at me I'll love you til my last dying breath Is what he told me Baby girl your all I need to be with me at night Someone by my side to ride He says this and more My heart is yours It took my breath away everytime And now I have no place To run and hide My ladies know what I mean But I can't deny What I am feeling Pushing aside the fact Shhh... Got my homeboys feeling me But to wrap this up He got me feeling things I've never felt before Twistin and grindin Smokin Mary jane getting high as the sky My eyes getting teary Oh here we go I've let it all go And they know He's what I'm asking for Shout out to my Dawg B-rad and Mo fo sho! |
Submitted on 2007-07-07 00:33:47 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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i'm sorry, i have trouble taking this kind of rap seriously. that being said, this really wasn't that bad! some of the words make me giggle, but then again, i'm a skinny white boy with long blonde hair. i think this had great rhyming, and it's about something important to you. when you write passionately, you get the best results! also, sometimes spur-of-the-moment writes turn out truly great. i definately underestimated you. i'd like to here this as a song. it would have to be pretty ganksta though! lol. also, i have only one rap on this site, and it's both political and hardcore, but i'd appreciate your thoughts on it. it's called 'bloodsuckers'. thanks! | Posted on 2007-07-07 00:00:00 | by freddybuzzkill | [ Reply to This ] | |
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