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    dots Submission Name: the improbable wardots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsthe improbable wardots
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    for far too long
    the hammer of my eyes
    was a rough cloud
    & the cathedral of my head
    had the slow moving brew of death
    about it

    senseless in the "pathetic" nights
    i removed all expectations from my life
    as it seemed impossible
    to live up to any of them
    including my own

    i found that sometimes
    it takes your worst enemy
    to help you win the improbable war
    of living

    & to be human,
    the nightmare of my childhood,
    was a strange rush indeed

    a lesson i will never learn again
    for i have conquered
    the pink fiery hells
    of my self




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