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    dots Submission Name: the abundant alwaysdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsthe abundant alwaysdots
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    & a loss for words
    breeds no other fever
    as the storms collapse
    & that of buildings
    where the fires gather
    & birds adore
    as no other form or function
    can ignore

    all be it stark and ravenous,
    the history of the flesh
    may be the blooming
    of all the relentless hours
    we have known

    i have become everything
    in the broken seconds
    of my life
    & in becoming myself
    i have suffered the loving hands
    of guilty thieves
    & the busted eyes
    of the abundant always




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