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    dots Submission Name: mystical parchmentdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsmystical parchmentdots
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    the broad, slippery cedar
    behind my house
    sings to me
    these liitle whispered songs
    of comfort

    & i can taste the pink, salty air
    of summer all around me

    the throbbing sex of the sun
    on my skin
    gives me hope
    for some sort of ripe, succulent new future

    i admire plants
    for the wetness of their lives
    while the crumbling,
    mystical parchment
    of my own skin
    rustles even louder
    than the surrounding leaves

    an endless love for nature
    leaves me tantric




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