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    dots Submission Name: nature stalks the winddots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsnature stalks the winddots
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    the trauma of serenity
    is that it always goes away.
    which is both a blessing & a curse
    for the trinities
    of the secret brain.

    & nature stalks the harmless
    with formless ghosts
    & the grief of soil
    while earthly splendors
    gauze the pink eyes of sparrows.

    and the drunken days are final
    as the bleeding fingers
    fondle the ancienct breeze,
    the sleeves of the trees
    & the beautiful sky of blowing.




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