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    dots Submission Name: the coldness of my insurgentsdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsthe coldness of my insurgentsdots
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    often it seems that i have been at war
    for centuries
    with the platoons of feathered romances
    i have known.

    the strategies of love ellude me
    as i'm always being flanked
    by the hearts of my collecting.

    & i have turned,
    ever so slightly,
    into the coldness of my insurgents
    for it is difficult
    to have known death
    so many times
    & to have not somewhat become it.

    i wonder
    if, in the end,
    i will only be left
    with the landscapes of my words
    to haunt me.

    or if somewhere,
    out there,
    there is some unarmed ghost of an era
    who can hear the words,
    "i love you"
    without dying




    Submitted on 2007-07-07 03:11:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, this is monumental. I feel there is more to it than there is to be read. There is body to it, heart. It's beautiful. Thanks for sharing it!
    | Posted on 2007-07-09 00:00:00 | by doppelganger | [ Reply to This ]


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