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    dots Submission Name: being a girldots

    Author: poppi
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 72/55/37
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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       i just elaborated some points of being a girl, i know the rhyming could have been better but i had trouble with it

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    dotsbeing a girldots

    Again today
    I wear my boostiay,
    Its getting harder and harder
    To play this frilly little charactor
    I'm tired of under-wire bras
    That mash up my ta-ta's!
    Sometimes I wish I wasn't a girl
    Classy and polished like a pearl

    It's difficult sitting so much
    And having to carry aound an ugly clutch
    Falling in the tiolet water
    After pausing Harry Potter
    This isn't fun,
    No you really can't trust me with a gun
    P.M.S is killing me
    Midol's kept me sane, can't you see?

    Waking up
    To apply makeup
    But then it rains
    My heel broke, so now I'm having leg pains
    It'd be easier you know?
    If i didn't have an artificial glow
    Hiding in the background
    from that jacked up hound

    Run home fast
    Before the soap opera has past
    I smile with my eyes,
    At your stumbling tries
    But god this stupid bra!
    I'm begining to remind myself of my Ma
    I wish I was a guy
    Then this would all be a lie

    Submitted on 2007-07-07 20:50:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow,I reallike this!It made meh chuckle quite a bit.It's teh truth though.I,mehself,hate being a girl,but I don't do or go through all of that trouble to keep up that "girly" character deal.In fact,I act like a guy practically all of teh time.PMS stuffs ish a [censored] though... Meh mom gets kinda pissed at meh for not being so girly,but I don't care.If I'd cared about looks,then I'd get a sex change cause I'd prob look hella better as a guy antyways.

    One word...


    Yea,boobs.I hate those fereaking things with a passion...And bras are stupid too...

    Antyways,call immature if yew want,but I don't care...

    This peice gave meh some funny and quite interesting mental images.Teh rhyming wasn't that bad in all actuallity.


    That made meh laugh!I know it's not speeled right,but I don't remember how it's spelled right now.

    " That mash up my ta-ta's"

    BEST LINE EVER!! lmmfao

    Antyways,good [censored].You spoke teh truth,and you did it well.Congrats!

    God bless!!

    <222 Lindel
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