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    dots Submission Name: Cease Their Doubtdots
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    Author: BCute
    ASL Info:    23/F/MO
    Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 1295/1417/363
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 100
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    Bytes: 1244



    Description:
       Not religious. A Love poem for a KING.


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    dotsCease Their Doubtdots
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    Broken heart for what breaks Yours,
    gazing into a world turned cold.
    Eyes stopped being cast upward,
    hearts stopped beliving in You we trust.

    A nation under a Prophetic Ruler,
    was ripped apart from its holy right.
    No longer we voice these words,
    in a free America's public schools.

    Knees cannot bow in prayer to You,
    but others are forgivable.
    Ten Commandments are brushed away,
    we have forgotten the Golden Rule.

    Eyes fill with tears, at those so lost,
    a dizzying effect grips a heart.
    Those who claim to know You cry,
    "My God, why do they doubt?"

    Churches seeped in dead religion,
    trapped under a title's influence,
    they have forgotten Christianity,
    being Baptist or Catholic doesn't count.

    Tithers giving ten percent,
    keeping porcelain hands clean.
    Forgetting we are Christ's body,
    disciples meant to go out.

    No one looks towards an Eastern horizon,
    awaiting the COMING RISEN KING,
    who will set up a kingdom of love and righteousness,
    who will forever cease all their doubt.




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      yes, all very true . . . kinda dragging
    | Posted on 2007-07-07 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]


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