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    dots Submission Name: SeaSide Soulsdots

    Author: itinnmannn
    Elite Ratio:    6.42 - 18/15/15
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSeaSide Soulsdots

    Sitting by the crash of
    daunting winter waves,
    Inhailing the sweet freeze
    energized by wheat colored rays,

    I drift in soothing solitude
    of waking thoughts,
    Enhanced by the sights and
    sounds this day bought.

    A glance up at birds
    circling rising currents high,
    Squawking sonets of gulls
    sing as they sail the skies.

    People leaving footprints
    in the wet frigid shore,
    Mans best friend fetching
    driftwood by the oceans roar.

    One kit dances and dips
    flying on paper wings,
    Diving to the earth by the will
    of out stretched strings.

    Children laugh as they dig
    deep in golden sand,
    A couple renewing love
    strolls hand in hand.

    Wisping winter winds
    tease at heavy coats,
    No one pays this to mind
    not a one takes note.

    For we are anointed by
    the oceans awakening cold,
    Made alive by this day
    now forever seaside souls.

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