WOW! The imagery was brilliant. I thought this was one of the well done poems. I haven't read all the poems on this site (I doubt anyone has) but in my opinion this would definately be in the better section. One question, in the second line of the third stanza, is 'Camoflauging' how it is spelt? Sorry if it is, I have dodgy spelling so it probably is, it was just annoying me not knowing.
Very cool imagery... I could never come up with something like that. You have a great ability, don't let it go. I didn't find anything wrong that the others didn't already point out, so great write. I would love to see more.