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Author: kittycampbel
ASL Info:    23 male uganda
Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 53 /72 /25
Words: 290
Class/Type: Deep Thought /Religious
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Just so words... any reviews are welcome.


Sovereign Lord I want....
To live with a heart of Gold
Like David the KIng
To be an Instrument of praise
Like his hands and voice
To be of wise counsel like Solomon his son.
To be hopeful like Joseph the Little dreamer boy

To hold your word high like a banner in the sky
To clamp to your laws with vigil
Like a flawless virgin who is afraid of other men but come.

To be Persistent & Forgiving Like Nelson Mandela
To forget what wrongs others have done
And become friends once more

To be Love worthy like Young Romeo in shakespear...
The rightfull keeper of the Heart
Not like a youth who moves from mate to another
Struggling with his Esteem.

To be a best friend
Who helps others touch and touch again
To be there like a good conscience
To be the glue that binds them together
To strengthen them like the Infant sun of morning.

To give with a willing heart
Because I can never pay for the air I breathe

Lord I want to..
Help me work like am Dying the next minute
And work as though I will never die
Command this world Like forces of Nature
Shaking this world like the four winds of the Earth.
To be carried on from old to young like Learning

Since I have the Alpha, The center of all things
And the End which is you?
I will dwell in thine turbanacle forever
Coz restless as Iam, I will settle in thee
To fulfil the words of saint Augustine
'We are rest less until we settle in thee'


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