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    dots Submission Name: my world within myselfdots
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    Author: sugar_sweet
    ASL Info:    20/ Female/ Canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 11/8/15
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 795
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       this is what I write when im depressed...this was written over the course of a day...enjoy


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    dotsmy world within myselfdots
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    My world is all I have
    there is no color
    there is no laughter
    there is only me
    alone with my thoughts
    Why wont this rain go away?
    Im waiting for the sun
    to feel the warmth on my face
    This world Ive created
    within myself
    It has turned against me
    Like so many things before
    Rejection is all that I know
    Terrified to see what comes next
    I will turn my heart to stone
    and try to feel nothing
    I must be insane
    Despirately I crawl
    with no where to go
    theres no world left for me




    Submitted on 2007-07-08 19:09:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      kind of dark...not usually something i'd like, but i do! i can relate to it.

    good job!
    | Posted on 2007-07-09 00:00:00 | by psalm305 | [ Reply to This ]
      i can relate to this poem perfectly i love it deffinetly one of my faves
    keep up the great work
    love stacey
    | Posted on 2007-07-09 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]


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