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    dots Submission Name: who is to blamedots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotswho is to blamedots
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    who is the blame
    for the tears in my eyes
    for the cuts on my wrists
    for me wanting to die
    who is to blame
    for the hate i now have
    for the scars on my heart
    for the images in my mind
    who is to blame
    for the knife in my hand
    for the suicide note beside me
    for the blood on my wrist
    no one really cares
    who is to blame
    because by the end of this poem
    ill just be another name
    on the list of people who chose suicide
    over a life of shame




    Submitted on 2007-07-09 07:10:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i'm not sure if you were serious in this poem, cause some of my writings are just made up and all...but if you're really contemplating suicide, i have to tell you, it's not worth it. not at all. my cousin just a few months ago killed himself cause he felt like he was in this world all alone and that no one loved him. but as you could see, at the funeral there were countless people there. i just didn't want some other person to make a mistake like that. he had so much going for him. and he just threw it all away. good luck and great write!
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2007-07-10 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm not sure if you were serious in this poem, cause some of my writings are just made up and all...but if you're really contemplating suicide, i have to tell you, it's not worth it. not at all. my cousin just a few months ago killed himself cause he felt like he was in this world all alone and that no one loved him. but as you could see, at the funeral there were countless people there. i just didn't want some other person to make a mistake like that. he had so much going for him. and he just threw it all away. good luck and great write!
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2007-07-10 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm not sure if you were serious in this poem, cause some of my writings are just made up and all...but if you're really contemplating suicide, i have to tell you, it's not worth it. not at all. my cousin just a few months ago killed himself cause he felt like he was in this world all alone and that no one loved him. but as you could see, at the funeral there were countless people there. i just didn't want some other person to make a mistake like that. he had so much going for him. and he just threw it all away. good luck and great write!
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2007-07-10 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm not sure if you were serious in this poem, cause some of my writings are just made up and all...but if you're really contemplating suicide, i have to tell you, it's not worth it. not at all. my cousin just a few months ago killed himself cause he felt like he was in this world all alone and that no one loved him. but as you could see, at the funeral there were countless people there. i just didn't want some other person to make a mistake like that. he had so much going for him. and he just threw it all away. good luck and great write!
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2007-07-10 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]


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