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    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    19/f/ TX baby!
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 302/166/70
    Words: 183
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 274
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1206



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       to my boyfriend when he thought it was sooo necessary to have sex.


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    I'm trying my hardest
    to clear this clouded head.
    I need to explain
    what needs to be said.

    It's hard to put this into words
    so forgive me if I stutter.
    I've been worrying about this
    so much I'm now a cutter.

    Get ready, hold tight
    while I reveal my utmost desires.
    I hear my instincts whisper,
    but I call them all liars.

    I've been holding back in fear
    of what you might think.
    The closer I get to telling you,
    the farther I begin to sink.

    To tell you the truth, I'm not ready
    and neither are you.
    But I feel if I don't give in,
    you're gonna say we're through.

    I feel I'm being pressured
    just so you'll stay.
    I hope in due time
    you'll see it my way.

    I know you have your needs,
    I mean no disrespect.
    But this goes against my morals,
    what do you expect?

    We have the rest of our lives.
    Why must we do this now?
    I've exposed my true emotions,
    it's time I take my bow.




    Submitted on 2007-07-09 11:02:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i agree exactly with katana ryoko
    giving a guy what he wants wont keep him around it will only keep him happy for short time till he wants more
    Love Stacey
    | Posted on 2007-07-10 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]
      Damn, how come I didn't read this BEFORE I gave in? Oh well, over with and done. Keep with your morals. If you give in, it won't make him stay. It will drive him away. So keep playing hard to get. Guys like that not easy girls.
    Katana
    | Posted on 2007-07-09 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]


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