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    dots Submission Name: Madnessdots
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    Author: Priestess
    ASL Info:    21/female/usa
    Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 49/118/51
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 830
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 646



    Description:
       I know its short, but I was angry and I really didn't care. Have you ever just wanted to kill someone?


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    dotsMadnessdots
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    Eyes irritated by unshed tears.
    Teeth gnashed together in rage.
    My minds been invaded by long lost fears,
    and It's set my broken heart ablaze.

    "My dagger holds the promise of your imminent doom,
    as my fingers tremble with anticipation."

    I wake from this dream in my own horrid room.
    The result of a sick imagination.

    I wish I could cherish and kiss you my love,
    but this bitterness devours my soul.
    This anger, this hate, doesn't come from above.
    But I cannot deny it anymore.





    Submitted on 2007-07-09 23:53:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      your right it is short, there is some cap's in the middle that you don't quite need, but its a good start (or finish) to something, let me know if you add anything to it

    Vynom~
    | Posted on 2007-08-04 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]
      One word for it. MADNESS!

    Which is really good! Keep it up!

    D-Ink
    | Posted on 2007-07-10 00:00:00 | by D-Ink | [ Reply to This ]


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