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    dots Submission Name: Its Hard To Say You Mean Nothingdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 265
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 621
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       ive never really spoken about him the way i am in this poem
    he is the sweetest guy i have every met and any girl is lucky to be loved by him
    im glad i got the chance to be happy with him im just sad that it could last forever i suppose but then again nothing is forever these days


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    dotsIts Hard To Say You Mean Nothingdots
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    its hard to lie about my feelings
    even harder to hide what is there
    although were over the feelings wont go away
    i guess it just shows how big of an impact you made
    now that were over ive got nothing but time to think
    and remember how perfect everything used to be
    there are so many things i miss about you
    like the way you said my name
    and just how cute you looked when you got mad at me
    i remember walking in my room to always find you laying on my bed
    you would always look up and smile
    it always made my heart melt
    i remember all those nights i was scared to go to sleep
    scared that my past would catch up on me
    scared that you would leave
    you promised to always love me promised to always care
    i believe all the promises you made
    but sometimes i just wish you were here
    there is nothing i want more in this world
    then to be held in your arms
    i wish that i could feel you kiss my cheek
    or even hold your hand
    its all these simple little things
    that made you the perfect man
    the fact that you wernt afraid to cry
    or really show how you feel
    but the thing i remember most
    is being in you warm and loving arms
    and knowing i was safe
    i guess what im trying to say is
    i find it hard to say you dont mean anything to me
    when your the most important thing in my life




    Submitted on 2007-07-10 09:36:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This made me cry (and I'm not kidding). This reminds me of my ex, and now I'm not getting another chance with her either :(
    | Posted on 2007-07-10 00:00:00 | by Lord Bane | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, this would break a heart of stone! Very finely done, so simple and so straight forward, and not a single "woe is me"!!! A potent piece of poetry here. Excellent! I loved it! bravo ... bravo ... bravo ... michael
    | Posted on 2007-07-10 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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