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    dots Submission Name: Last Poem I'm Wasting On You.dots
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    Author: FarFromSanityy
    ASL Info:    15/F/look behind youuu.
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 52/76/34
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 792
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 574



    Description:
       Yeah, I ripped off the title of an Evanescence song. I know. Sue me. but it seemed to fit. This is the third [and last] poem I wrote about this girl.
    Anywho, this is about an ex friend who I made the mistake of missing and almost went back to her. But obviously, when I tried, she proved she wasn't worth it.
    I am now numb to the whole situation. I'm not angry at her anymore. I'm not missing her at all. I don't feel bad anymore. I don't give a shit about her anymore. I feel nothing when it comes to her. I'm through completely with her.


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    dotsLast Poem I'm Wasting On You.dots
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    My senseless need for instigation
    The fact that I went through with my temptations
    Is what drove you away

    Deleterious words you spoke so freely
    Twisted things you evidently think of me
    Is what kept me away

    My loneliness growing day by day
    And the inane thought you may feel the same
    Is what almost drove me back

    Realization that you haven't changed at all
    And my common sense coming back through this fall
    Is what lets me know I'm never making that mistake again.




    Submitted on 2007-07-10 15:18:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      when i saw the title, i took a guess at who it was,... and i was right, haha. although it was short, i really enjoyed this poem. it has to be one of my favorites from you. put add onto it! the description is vivid and it leaves me wanting more.
    love you, gurlll! <333
    | Posted on 2007-07-10 00:00:00 | by DontxSurrender | [ Reply to This ]


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