Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Love Did Her wrongdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: LadyMustang
    ASL Info:    42, female, West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 222/171/71
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
    Total Views: 118
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1240



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsLove Did Her wrongdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Love Did Her Wrong

    There was a time she believed in her dreams,
    Now she only hears her heart's screams.

    She's packed her dreams away, Her heart
    doesn't dream for another day.

    She use to have the courage to be strong,
    Until love did her heart so wrong.

    Now she only sees what is right here, Her
    heart only knows it's own fear.

    There was a light that shown upon her before,
    Her glow has burned out doesn't shine anymore.

    She doesn't know what it's like to be loved by a man
    that could be true, True love her heart has never knew.

    Though to love she once gave her heart and
    soul, Never again will she give it control.

    For only pain has it brought into her life,
    It cuts right through her like a knife.

    She shall never place trust within this emotion,
    For no man has ever given his complete devotion.

    Her heart only feels what's already in place, For
    nothing could erase the stains upon her face.

    Written By: Wilma Hill
    copyright© July 7, 2007





    Submitted on 2007-07-10 20:13:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      THIS piece is great!!! the lines went rather smoothly... and the emotions ran deep. I have been there before and can relate.
    Thanks for a great read.!!!
    keep up the great work.

    ~MaGgIe
    | Posted on 2007-07-12 00:00:00 | by Magger32 | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.