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    dots Submission Name: nothing more nothing lessdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 565
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    nothing more nothing less
    what you see is what you get
    im broken and bleeding
    my mind is a mess
    im not always pretty
    i dont try my best
    id rather give up
    then to fall on my face
    i hate looking stupid
    im sick of this place
    but like i said what you see is what you get
    nothing more nothing less




    Submitted on 2007-07-10 23:01:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Neat, nifty, sly, funny, but also cogent and highly thoughtful at the same time... not easy to combine all of these things into such a short poem ... most well and ably done! bravo ... bravo ... bravo ... michael
    | Posted on 2007-07-11 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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