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    dots Submission Name: The beetle And The Dragon Flydots
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    Author: sunnysideup
    ASL Info:    35/F/FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 30/37/15
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe beetle And The Dragon Flydots
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    Sitting upon the porch on day
    I saw a wonderful thing,
    a tiny little dragon fly suffered
    a broken wing.
    Rushing to his aid came a beetle
    bright and green,
    tossed the dragon fly upon his back
    never dulling his beautiful sheen.
    He carried him across the lawn
    walking up and over.
    He found a sunny little spot
    and deposited him in the clover.
    The beetle sang to the dragon fly
    and happily dressed his wing.
    The dragon fly tapped his tiny little foot
    as he listened to the beetle sing.





    Submitted on 2007-07-11 14:51:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Haha, ahhhh, that made me laugh. That's funny and adorable. It's nice to read some poetry that's not trying to be super deep and symbolic and stuff.
    I'm sure yeh could find some deep meaning in this, but it would undermine the simplicity of the images.

    Very good job!
    | Posted on 2007-10-10 00:00:00 | by Zai | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh my goodness, this is so cute! You should be published, I think I would read a book or anthology from you, I love this. I am going to add this as a favorite because it is just beautiful. Thanks for sharing this, I really love it.
    Be well,
    ~Azura*
    | Posted on 2007-07-11 00:00:00 | by EmpathicAya | [ Reply to This ]



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