I felt proud to delete you off my list
A milestone for me to let you go from my top 8
Weeks went by, I frantically thought
Does he know? Does he care?
Will he call and Ask why?
Yesterday I saw your face on a friends top 8
Memories flood back of what I had done
How Could I be so dumb?
I read your status, you're looking for the one
Sadly She's not me I know, yet I wish it was.
Looking at your page I see how cute you are
And how deep you are for your profile song.
Displaying affection for a girl you'll never know
I stare helplessly wanting to call you and
Make you mine again,
Pride overpowers my heart
As I move on forgetting the day I accepted
Your Friend Request.
That is indeed sad!
Not just the topic alone, what you had done.
I think you should have given him the courtesy of telling him to his face, rather than him finding out through MySpace.
What would you do if your roles were reversed?
As far as the poem is concerned:
You may want to consider changing
"Proudness overpowers my heart" to "Pride overpowers my heart". PROUDNESS sticks out like a sore thumb.