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    dots Submission Name: A thought out thoughtless medleydots
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    Author: pist0l_pete
    ASL Info:    25/m/montreal
    Elite Ratio:    4.35 - 10/17/6
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA thought out thoughtless medleydots
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    Sleepless with a million thoughts

    euphoric: 3am with a guitar in your hands.

    .....

    When was it ever suppose to be easy...trying to collect rain in a strainer.

    .....

    Watching you watching me....
    Watching you....just so lovely.

    All our imperfections a touched up painting so perfectly stroked....and this is what I have to give to know it will be alright.

    .....

    Inspired to frustrate myself so late
    Thoughtless yet full of thought
    I keep playing to show myself I can




    Submitted on 2007-07-11 16:13:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      kind of hard to understand , but there is a meaning to this poem , you reactions are straight forward , a mixture of detail , very suspense , good poem , keep writing
    | Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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