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    dots Submission Name: Epical Deceitdots
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    Author: Phantom Tragedy
    ASL Info:    20 male georgia
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 1/2/3
    Words: 557
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       Another one of my poem's that I've submitted to All Poetry.


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    dotsEpical Deceitdots
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    Listen well my son, for this story carries deceit
    Lies within lies, betrayal and heartbreak.
    This is the story of a young man who's life,
    surrounded by darkness, that tragically came to it's end.
    This is the story of Eonai-Oniashi.

    He was an outcast, the unwanted.
    He grew up in pain, and lived in strife.
    Look for his memory shattered at hands of his oppressers.
    They hate everything different,
    Everything they can't control.
    He wanted nothing more than to live his life,
    A meager exsistance, he'd be the first to tell you.
    But his life was his. He loved it, for it was the
    most precious thing he owned.
    Eonai was the son of lost souls,
    The brother to those in pain.

    He met a girl, a beatiful girl,
    He loved this girl, that beatiful girl.
    When he told her he wanted to keep her,
    forever and ever, inside his heart forever.
    She was excited, the prospect was exciting!
    For her intent was cruel,
    so when he said those words, the heartfelt words.
    She formed her plan,
    this girl... She was going to take from him,
    Everything he held dear.
    For love her he did, and defy him she did.
    She claimed that she loved him, and whispered in his ear.
    "You'll always have me, my love, the one I hold dear."

    "I'll love you for always, and hold you forever, my love!
    I'll love you for always, and keep you forever,
    As long as we're together my dear I'll stand by you."
    When he said these words, those heartfelt words,
    She knew she had him.
    He gave her his heart, yet got none in return,
    Blinded he was by the words she gave him!
    Those pretty words, wasted from the lips of a temptress!
    Her plan was unfolding, before her very eyes.
    He knew nothing of her plan, knew nothing of her lies.
    Lies beget deceit. What will befall his exsistance?

    What went on inside her mind, you ask?
    Well, this woman was evil, she had but one goal.
    To take from him his life, and devour his soul.
    To take his heart, is what one does best.
    Humanity in strife, she can't resist.

    Years went by, and the lies continued on.
    He gave to her everything, anything she desired,
    It was growing close!
    Creeping ever near to the day when she
    would betray him.

    The day came and she was excited!
    Excited as the day when he said those words;
    "I'll love you for always, and hold you forever, my love
    I'll love you for always, and keep you forever,
    As long as we're together, my dear I'll stand by you."
    She crept into the room they had shared for years.
    A knife glinting from her hand.
    She knelt down, placed a hand on his brow,
    She stared into his face with hard resolve,
    And she slew him.
    And as he lay dying, he whispered those words he said long ago.
    "I'll love you for always, and hold you forever, my love
    I'll love you for always, and keep you forever,
    As long as we're together, my dear I'll stand by you."


    She took the most precious thing any of us will ever own.
    The life that we live...




    Submitted on 2007-07-11 21:00:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      so detailed and it grasps the reader, amazing piece!
    | Posted on 2007-07-12 00:00:00 | by imyourxpan | [ Reply to This ]


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